Writers are Exciting People: Meet Kelsey Timmerman

The cliché that writers sit locked up in their writing space, introverted and alone is so far from the truth. Writers are some of the most exciting people to hang out with. I had the pleasure of critiquing with my writing group and a special guest, author Kelsey Timmerman.

Timmerman lives with a humorous punch and writes with one, too. He even adds many “lol” moments when writing about topics that activists go crazy over. In his book Where Am I Wearing he travels to the countries from where his favorite clothes flow. But he wasn’t there to investigate the many wrongs in the form of child labor and sweatshops. Nor was he there to write a dry academic account. He went to meet the people who made the clothes and spend some time in their world.

His story and writing are as enjoyable as his company which is saying a lot.

Recommended: Where Am I Wearing

Write or Sleep?

Schedules. Schedules. Schedules. I need a new one and I need it fast. I love my wife so I have to give her attention (no complaints with this one). My dog needs love and exercise (again not a problem).I also have to help around the house (slight grumble). I have to plan to teach middle school and grade papers (excessive groans, especially the grading). But, I also need to write.

Here is the dilemma. There aren’t enough hours in a day to do all of these things and write as much as I want to. So, do I add more hours to my day by sleeping less? I have to think that I could condition my body to six hours instead of seven or eight (sometimes ten or twelve). I will be adding grad courses soon and within a year (or two) a baby to the family. I’m only getting busier and sleep seems the only element that I can control.

Do I write at the expense of sleep? Time to crunch the numbers (maybe the student’s papers too).

Writing Journal

I’m working on: A major overhaul of my first novel, Treasure Hunter Tales: The Family Legend. I will end up cutting and rewriting 50-75 percent of the original.

I’m listening to: Celtic Thunder: Heartland

I’m happy because: I’m finally learning how to write fiction.

The devil on my shoulder says: Murder every word, sentence, paragraph, and scene that isn’t 100 percent necessary. That’s right, I said murder.

Find your voice through critique

One might think that the act of writing helps one find their voice. You know…the way one puts words on a page and sounds like him or herself in actual conversation (although a bit more formal). I have found a better way to discover one’s own voice. The secret: critique other’s work.

It doesn’t matter if that critique is based on an already published book or something from a critique partner at a workshop or writers’ group. Trust me there are plenty of books out there that are written poorly and you can help yourself by reading through and deciding which words and phrases you would have tweaked.

Personally I’ve found that I tend to write action and dialogue over internalization. I am always looking to raise the stakes in a scene, and I discovered this by suggesting such in others work.  In reality it may not work for them, but by attempting to help, I have done myself an immense favor.

I found my voice.

Writing Journal

I’m working on: Another edit of my first novel Treasure Hunter Tales: The Family Legend. I received some great feedback recently on how to improve the writing and the story. It’s amazing how a “finished product” is far from complete even after a professional edit.

I’m listening to: Heavy metal tonight, Disturbed: Indestructible.

I’m happy because: Monday is almost over.

The devil on my shoulder says: More chocolate-chip cookies.

My Critique Group (aka call to action)

Work can get us all down at times, draining our energy and provoking us to the couch upon arriving home. This has been me for the last three weeks. My writing has been down (reading up however). My creative muse has disappeared. My conscience screams “help, this can’t happen.” Then comes Thursday night.

My writing critique group has pushed me to write and edit even when the rest of my being is trying to sloth on the big comfy couch. Critique groups are invaluable. Every group has an Irene (crazy/fun lady) that makes even a slow meeting peppy like popping corn.  If you are a writer without a critique group, you need to get one and fast.

It will improve your writing!

Why I love writing for middle grade readers and young adults

The more I work with middle schoolers, the more I like my audience. I don’t appreciate the occasional rudeness (sometimes often), and I slowly burn inside when I ask a student to stop doing something and he/she does the same thing five minutes later. But the beauty of this group lies in their only predictable behavior…

UNPREDICTABILITY

I value this as a writer because it is much more fun to make irrational, sometimes crazy, characters in my stories. That is what this readership expects. Not neat and perfect characters, but people who have outbursts, sarcasm, evil thoughts, and an underlying sense of invincibility. Come and visit a middle school classroom and you’ll know what I mean. Write on.

You Love Writing? Better Love Editing!

Writing is the fun and creative part, while editing is the crucial step in the craft. One must consider every word, sentance, paragraph, and line of dialogue while editing, and they all have to be polished if anyone is ever going to consider publishing the novel.

After the first edit, one will have readers make suggestions and then edit again. Then, one might have a critique group help and thus we have another edit. Finally a professional edit takes place and the novel is rewritten again. Now a story might be ready to send to editors and agents (and they will probably have you edit it at least once more). The amazing part is that as one improves his/her writing, the last edit that felt so good might seem amaturish a year later. That’s when you know you’re working and improving.

I’m 66 pages into the first edit of my second novel. I will be done editing hopefully by next summer. Then I’ll have the third book finished and begin a first edit on it. If writing is your passion, editing had better be too.

The key to finishing a novel: write first and edit later

Time for the long, but fun, process of editing my 220 page manuscript. The reality is that I will probably change 30-50 percent of the work before I feel it is ready to send to literary agents and publishers. This might seem outlandish, but it is part of fiction writing. There are few authors who can sit down and craft a perfect story the first time through, and theirs are often the literary (sometimes plot devoid) type. You know the ones that are made into movies and the end leaves you with a “what in the hell” response.

One cannot sell a book in today’s market that isn’t well edited. But one can’t edit a book if it is never finished. For this reason, I write the entire first draft with minimal editing. Why? Because if you try to edit and write simultaneously, you may get bogged down and never finish the story. When one knows that it may take them years to complete a novel (depending on your dedication) there is no need to add the stress of tearing apart you own work while writing it.  

For the record, it took me seven months to write my first novel and eleven to write the second (It was during my first year of teaching mind you).  Most writers have a day job and for that reason, motivation is a tricky thing. Don’t waste your precious writing time editing. In the end your story will have evolved in ways you couldn’t foresee and those perfectly written pages may be deleted.

The key to finishing is writing!

I’m dead tired but happy!

I just finished the first draft of  Treasure Hunter Tales: The Spirit of Steel. It is the second novel in my trilogy and weighs in at 220 pages (62,000 words). It is an accomplishment that is difficult to describe, but I know that my work is far from complete.

Time to start editing. Okay…maybe I’ll wait till tomorrow. I’ll already need a pot of coffee to get up for church. If I’m shaking it’s not because I’m filled with the spirit,  just caffine. Time for bed!