Writers are Exciting People: Meet Kelsey Timmerman

The cliché that writers sit locked up in their writing space, introverted and alone is so far from the truth. Writers are some of the most exciting people to hang out with. I had the pleasure of critiquing with my writing group and a special guest, author Kelsey Timmerman.

Timmerman lives with a humorous punch and writes with one, too. He even adds many “lol” moments when writing about topics that activists go crazy over. In his book Where Am I Wearing he travels to the countries from where his favorite clothes flow. But he wasn’t there to investigate the many wrongs in the form of child labor and sweatshops. Nor was he there to write a dry academic account. He went to meet the people who made the clothes and spend some time in their world.

His story and writing are as enjoyable as his company which is saying a lot.

Recommended: Where Am I Wearing

Find your voice through critique

One might think that the act of writing helps one find their voice. You know…the way one puts words on a page and sounds like him or herself in actual conversation (although a bit more formal). I have found a better way to discover one’s own voice. The secret: critique other’s work.

It doesn’t matter if that critique is based on an already published book or something from a critique partner at a workshop or writers’ group. Trust me there are plenty of books out there that are written poorly and you can help yourself by reading through and deciding which words and phrases you would have tweaked.

Personally I’ve found that I tend to write action and dialogue over internalization. I am always looking to raise the stakes in a scene, and I discovered this by suggesting such in others work.  In reality it may not work for them, but by attempting to help, I have done myself an immense favor.

I found my voice.

My Critique Group (aka call to action)

Work can get us all down at times, draining our energy and provoking us to the couch upon arriving home. This has been me for the last three weeks. My writing has been down (reading up however). My creative muse has disappeared. My conscience screams “help, this can’t happen.” Then comes Thursday night.

My writing critique group has pushed me to write and edit even when the rest of my being is trying to sloth on the big comfy couch. Critique groups are invaluable. Every group has an Irene (crazy/fun lady) that makes even a slow meeting peppy like popping corn.  If you are a writer without a critique group, you need to get one and fast.

It will improve your writing!

Why I love writing for middle grade readers and young adults

The more I work with middle schoolers, the more I like my audience. I don’t appreciate the occasional rudeness (sometimes often), and I slowly burn inside when I ask a student to stop doing something and he/she does the same thing five minutes later. But the beauty of this group lies in their only predictable behavior…

UNPREDICTABILITY

I value this as a writer because it is much more fun to make irrational, sometimes crazy, characters in my stories. That is what this readership expects. Not neat and perfect characters, but people who have outbursts, sarcasm, evil thoughts, and an underlying sense of invincibility. Come and visit a middle school classroom and you’ll know what I mean. Write on.

Writing has been on my mind!

When I awoke this morning, hauled my drowsy self out of bed, and lumbered down the stairs at 6:00 a.m. I decided that I need to diversify my writing. I currently focus on novels and occasional short stories, but it is all or nothing with them in terms of making a living.

I have always enjoyed writing essays since my first years in college, and I have a descent background in prep sport and education. If I am ever going to write full-time, I need to tap into all of my skills to build a platform. My writing mind is at its sharpest at night. But, for the next nine months I have to sleep during those hours to give my middle schoolers the best I have to offer. 

Ahh to set my own schedule as a full-time writer.

Stop your laughing (I can hear you through the monitor).  A person can dream, right? That’s probably all it will ever be. Unless…well…we’ll just wait and see.

You Love Writing? Better Love Editing!

Writing is the fun and creative part, while editing is the crucial step in the craft. One must consider every word, sentance, paragraph, and line of dialogue while editing, and they all have to be polished if anyone is ever going to consider publishing the novel.

After the first edit, one will have readers make suggestions and then edit again. Then, one might have a critique group help and thus we have another edit. Finally a professional edit takes place and the novel is rewritten again. Now a story might be ready to send to editors and agents (and they will probably have you edit it at least once more). The amazing part is that as one improves his/her writing, the last edit that felt so good might seem amaturish a year later. That’s when you know you’re working and improving.

I’m 66 pages into the first edit of my second novel. I will be done editing hopefully by next summer. Then I’ll have the third book finished and begin a first edit on it. If writing is your passion, editing had better be too.

The key to finishing a novel: write first and edit later

Time for the long, but fun, process of editing my 220 page manuscript. The reality is that I will probably change 30-50 percent of the work before I feel it is ready to send to literary agents and publishers. This might seem outlandish, but it is part of fiction writing. There are few authors who can sit down and craft a perfect story the first time through, and theirs are often the literary (sometimes plot devoid) type. You know the ones that are made into movies and the end leaves you with a “what in the hell” response.

One cannot sell a book in today’s market that isn’t well edited. But one can’t edit a book if it is never finished. For this reason, I write the entire first draft with minimal editing. Why? Because if you try to edit and write simultaneously, you may get bogged down and never finish the story. When one knows that it may take them years to complete a novel (depending on your dedication) there is no need to add the stress of tearing apart you own work while writing it.  

For the record, it took me seven months to write my first novel and eleven to write the second (It was during my first year of teaching mind you).  Most writers have a day job and for that reason, motivation is a tricky thing. Don’t waste your precious writing time editing. In the end your story will have evolved in ways you couldn’t foresee and those perfectly written pages may be deleted.

The key to finishing is writing!

Getting Past the Big Lie

With any profession or hobby there are people who are naturals. They can downhill ski on their first try (not me, almost died). They can bake a perfect cake at a young age (that was one and one half cups of water not eleven and one half). They can catch any shaped ball effortlessly and the list continues.

The Big Lie I’m referring to is personal in terms of writing, but common to many fields. It is simply that the only people who can write books are those who are born with the gift. Essentially that it can’t be taught. I realized when I sat down to write my first novel that I had no clue how to begin the story, write dialogue, plot the story, or create characters. But I did it anyway.

While I wrote, I read books aimed at the same age group, listened to books on my way to work, and read books on the craft of writing. Then, about a hundred pages in, I realized something. The beginning was horrible (I rewrote it completely), my grammar was horrible (still learning), and my characters were finally speaking to me. I was learning to a degree that Amanda couldn’t believe. She had read my first college papers and they weren’t pretty.

The more I write, the more I learn about writing. Practice can get you to the level of the naturals, and in the end you will feel greater accomplishment. Don’t waste years of your life thinking that you aren’t good enough. Just dive in and learn from your mistakes.

So you want to write a book?

Have you ever read  a book and said, I could’ve written that. We all have. But writing a book is a complex and long process. In a perfect world experienced by someone with a job and maybe kids: If it takes a year to write, another year to edit and find an agent, another six months for that agent to get a publishing contract, and another eighteen months to get the book on the shelf, you are looking at a four year process. And that is being super optimistic. Most people write for more than ten years and get their fifth or sixth novel published. Writing is not for the faint of heart. Here are ten things to keep in mind if you’ve ever considered writing a book and want to have it published (if you just want to write for yourself and your family, some of this isn’t applicable):

  1. If anyone or anything can convince you not to do it, then don’t waste your time.
  2. Write about what you are passionate about. Your readers will see your passion on the page. No passion equals boring.
  3. Plot is important (I hate getting to the end of a book and saying WHAT!), but a strong protagonist is what will keep people reading.
  4. The muses come and go, so set a schedule and goals to keep yourself motivated. One hour a night, or one page a night, or 500 words a night, whatever! Think this way, one page a night means a first draft in a year. Whatever you prefer set a schedule and stick to it. Otherwise it will probably never get finished, and that is a sad thought.
  5. Know your characters inside and out. Know who they are and you will know how they react when so-and-so dies… Realistic characters with unique voices are the key to good stories that keep people reading.
  6. Your book is not done until it is published! It is difficult to rework the baby that you just spent a year writing, but necessary if you want to see it in print. By your fifth draft you might be ready to send it to publishers or agents.
  7. See where it will fit on the bookshelf at (insert bookstore). If it would be considered its own category, rethink it to make it fit somewhere. Publishers want sales and they can only sell what fits on the shelf at the big stores.
  8. Be prepared to do 90-95 percent of your own marketing. When you are a bestseller, you might get some help from the publisher…maybe.
  9. Be ready for more rejection than you have ever experienced. The big publishers only accept work that is represented by an agent. Agents all have their own preferences and most represent 10-50 authors. Getting their ear is difficult, but the first step in the process. You need thick skin, a good sales pitch, and a solid support group.
  10. Find or start a writers group. Writers are everywhere and the serious ones know that they need constructive feedback to improve their work. These groups not only help with improving your writing, they also provide needed support and networking.

What was that? You still want to write? Then start with your characters and structure a story. Or just start writing (some people can do it this way, I need an outline). Good luck and let your passion fill the blank pages.

Author Kelsey Timmerman

I had the pleasure of meeting author Kelsey Timmerman this past weekend. He is not only a great person (not to mention hilarious) but has also written an interesting book titled: Where am I wearing?

He had the idea and the guts to trace back the clothes he was wearing to their place of origin. His book is an account of the traveling and insight into the lives of the people who make most of the articles of clothing that we fashion. I can’t wait to read the book in its entirety.