Writing has been on my mind!

When I awoke this morning, hauled my drowsy self out of bed, and lumbered down the stairs at 6:00 a.m. I decided that I need to diversify my writing. I currently focus on novels and occasional short stories, but it is all or nothing with them in terms of making a living.

I have always enjoyed writing essays since my first years in college, and I have a descent background in prep sport and education. If I am ever going to write full-time, I need to tap into all of my skills to build a platform. My writing mind is at its sharpest at night. But, for the next nine months I have to sleep during those hours to give my middle schoolers the best I have to offer. 

Ahh to set my own schedule as a full-time writer.

Stop your laughing (I can hear you through the monitor).  A person can dream, right? That’s probably all it will ever be. Unless…well…we’ll just wait and see.

You Love Writing? Better Love Editing!

Writing is the fun and creative part, while editing is the crucial step in the craft. One must consider every word, sentance, paragraph, and line of dialogue while editing, and they all have to be polished if anyone is ever going to consider publishing the novel.

After the first edit, one will have readers make suggestions and then edit again. Then, one might have a critique group help and thus we have another edit. Finally a professional edit takes place and the novel is rewritten again. Now a story might be ready to send to editors and agents (and they will probably have you edit it at least once more). The amazing part is that as one improves his/her writing, the last edit that felt so good might seem amaturish a year later. That’s when you know you’re working and improving.

I’m 66 pages into the first edit of my second novel. I will be done editing hopefully by next summer. Then I’ll have the third book finished and begin a first edit on it. If writing is your passion, editing had better be too.

Writing Journal

I’m working on: The first edit of Treasure Hunter Tales: The Spirit of Steel. It is slow going, but my beginning needed a serious makeover.

I’m listening to: Loreena McKennit: An Ancient Muse

I’m happy because: I’m back to school and will be amongst my intended audience for 182 days.

The devil on my shoulder says: Another cup of evening coffee won’t hurt.

The key to finishing a novel: write first and edit later

Time for the long, but fun, process of editing my 220 page manuscript. The reality is that I will probably change 30-50 percent of the work before I feel it is ready to send to literary agents and publishers. This might seem outlandish, but it is part of fiction writing. There are few authors who can sit down and craft a perfect story the first time through, and theirs are often the literary (sometimes plot devoid) type. You know the ones that are made into movies and the end leaves you with a “what in the hell” response.

One cannot sell a book in today’s market that isn’t well edited. But one can’t edit a book if it is never finished. For this reason, I write the entire first draft with minimal editing. Why? Because if you try to edit and write simultaneously, you may get bogged down and never finish the story. When one knows that it may take them years to complete a novel (depending on your dedication) there is no need to add the stress of tearing apart you own work while writing it.  

For the record, it took me seven months to write my first novel and eleven to write the second (It was during my first year of teaching mind you).  Most writers have a day job and for that reason, motivation is a tricky thing. Don’t waste your precious writing time editing. In the end your story will have evolved in ways you couldn’t foresee and those perfectly written pages may be deleted.

The key to finishing is writing!

I’m dead tired but happy!

I just finished the first draft of  Treasure Hunter Tales: The Spirit of Steel. It is the second novel in my trilogy and weighs in at 220 pages (62,000 words). It is an accomplishment that is difficult to describe, but I know that my work is far from complete.

Time to start editing. Okay…maybe I’ll wait till tomorrow. I’ll already need a pot of coffee to get up for church. If I’m shaking it’s not because I’m filled with the spirit,  just caffine. Time for bed!

A productive day! Nearly 2000 words.

I’m working on: The final conflict! Finally! I’m on page 206, with less than thirty to go.

I’m listening to: Fleurs du Mal by Sarah Brightman.

I’m happy because: I’m nearly done with the first draft of my second novel

The devil on my shoulder says: NO need to sleep. Just write till you finish. May the coffee gods be with you.

Getting Past the Big Lie

With any profession or hobby there are people who are naturals. They can downhill ski on their first try (not me, almost died). They can bake a perfect cake at a young age (that was one and one half cups of water not eleven and one half). They can catch any shaped ball effortlessly and the list continues.

The Big Lie I’m referring to is personal in terms of writing, but common to many fields. It is simply that the only people who can write books are those who are born with the gift. Essentially that it can’t be taught. I realized when I sat down to write my first novel that I had no clue how to begin the story, write dialogue, plot the story, or create characters. But I did it anyway.

While I wrote, I read books aimed at the same age group, listened to books on my way to work, and read books on the craft of writing. Then, about a hundred pages in, I realized something. The beginning was horrible (I rewrote it completely), my grammar was horrible (still learning), and my characters were finally speaking to me. I was learning to a degree that Amanda couldn’t believe. She had read my first college papers and they weren’t pretty.

The more I write, the more I learn about writing. Practice can get you to the level of the naturals, and in the end you will feel greater accomplishment. Don’t waste years of your life thinking that you aren’t good enough. Just dive in and learn from your mistakes.

Hoorah! We can use the word “picnic” afterall.

You might have read my rant on the origins of the word “picnic,” and you might not have. Either way we can learn a great lesson from this factual error on my part. I wrongly stated that the word had origins in picking a n*&%#* at lynchings. The interesting part is that I never heard about this until I was in a college class with a professor I considered trustworthy, and he explained to us how it was the truth…That was in 2006.

Now in 2009, having never heard about this word origin since I smartly share it with the world only to realize that my professor must have recieved the brilliantly contrived  e-mail hoax (and believed it).  I was rightly corrected by an anstute reader (See Patti’s Blog) and am happy to share that my information was bad and that we can thank the French for the word picnic as well as fries (this one is legitimate…trust me).

Continue with your picnics but never trust an e-mail. See snopes.com if you want those e-mails broken down to fact and fiction.

Write brain down for maintenance

I had hoped for another 4,000 word night, but I fell short with 1,200. I am going crazy as I have entered into the books final conflict and only have about 10,000 words to go. Ahhhh!  The intense instrumental was at work, but not inspiring enough.

Have I been tricked? Were the two cups of coffee decaf? Time to let my brain continue the story while I sleep. Write brain is being ghosted.

If the muses are speaking then write!

My house was invaded by women and suitcases of jewelry last night, so I took the opportunity to write (despite how much I love hanging with a room full of ladies). With a little help from my Lord of the Rings soundtracks to cover the racous laughter, I produced over 4,000 words (about 15 pages).

A few more nights like this and I will have a first draft of my second novel complete. I wonder what I could do with a tastefully simple party going on in the background?

Sometimes I have to force myself to write to avoid the terrible state of mind known as “writers block.” That is why when the godesses of creativity are smiling upon you, you have to write! write! write!