Writing Journal

I’m working on: A major overhaul of my first novel, Treasure Hunter Tales: The Family Legend. I will end up cutting and rewriting 50-75 percent of the original.

I’m listening to: Celtic Thunder: Heartland

I’m happy because: I’m finally learning how to write fiction.

The devil on my shoulder says: Murder every word, sentence, paragraph, and scene that isn’t 100 percent necessary. That’s right, I said murder.

Writing Journal

I’m working on: A major rewrite of my first novel, Treasure Hunter Tales: The Family Legend.

I’m listening to: The soundtrack to the movie 300.

I’m happy because: It is the weekend and time to write!

The devil on my shoulder says: Take a weekend off of school and just get this novel up to par.

Find your voice through critique

One might think that the act of writing helps one find their voice. You know…the way one puts words on a page and sounds like him or herself in actual conversation (although a bit more formal). I have found a better way to discover one’s own voice. The secret: critique other’s work.

It doesn’t matter if that critique is based on an already published book or something from a critique partner at a workshop or writers’ group. Trust me there are plenty of books out there that are written poorly and you can help yourself by reading through and deciding which words and phrases you would have tweaked.

Personally I’ve found that I tend to write action and dialogue over internalization. I am always looking to raise the stakes in a scene, and I discovered this by suggesting such in others work.  In reality it may not work for them, but by attempting to help, I have done myself an immense favor.

I found my voice.

Writing Journal

I’m working on: Another edit of my first novel Treasure Hunter Tales: The Family Legend. I received some great feedback recently on how to improve the writing and the story. It’s amazing how a “finished product” is far from complete even after a professional edit.

I’m listening to: Heavy metal tonight, Disturbed: Indestructible.

I’m happy because: Monday is almost over.

The devil on my shoulder says: More chocolate-chip cookies.