The key to finishing a novel: write first and edit later

Time for the long, but fun, process of editing my 220 page manuscript. The reality is that I will probably change 30-50 percent of the work before I feel it is ready to send to literary agents and publishers. This might seem outlandish, but it is part of fiction writing. There are few authors who can sit down and craft a perfect story the first time through, and theirs are often the literary (sometimes plot devoid) type. You know the ones that are made into movies and the end leaves you with a “what in the hell” response.

One cannot sell a book in today’s market that isn’t well edited. But one can’t edit a book if it is never finished. For this reason, I write the entire first draft with minimal editing. Why? Because if you try to edit and write simultaneously, you may get bogged down and never finish the story. When one knows that it may take them years to complete a novel (depending on your dedication) there is no need to add the stress of tearing apart you own work while writing it.  

For the record, it took me seven months to write my first novel and eleven to write the second (It was during my first year of teaching mind you).  Most writers have a day job and for that reason, motivation is a tricky thing. Don’t waste your precious writing time editing. In the end your story will have evolved in ways you couldn’t foresee and those perfectly written pages may be deleted.

The key to finishing is writing!

I’m dead tired but happy!

I just finished the first draft of  Treasure Hunter Tales: The Spirit of Steel. It is the second novel in my trilogy and weighs in at 220 pages (62,000 words). It is an accomplishment that is difficult to describe, but I know that my work is far from complete.

Time to start editing. Okay…maybe I’ll wait till tomorrow. I’ll already need a pot of coffee to get up for church. If I’m shaking it’s not because I’m filled with the spirit,  just caffine. Time for bed!

A productive day! Nearly 2000 words.

I’m working on: The final conflict! Finally! I’m on page 206, with less than thirty to go.

I’m listening to: Fleurs du Mal by Sarah Brightman.

I’m happy because: I’m nearly done with the first draft of my second novel

The devil on my shoulder says: NO need to sleep. Just write till you finish. May the coffee gods be with you.

Getting Past the Big Lie

With any profession or hobby there are people who are naturals. They can downhill ski on their first try (not me, almost died). They can bake a perfect cake at a young age (that was one and one half cups of water not eleven and one half). They can catch any shaped ball effortlessly and the list continues.

The Big Lie I’m referring to is personal in terms of writing, but common to many fields. It is simply that the only people who can write books are those who are born with the gift. Essentially that it can’t be taught. I realized when I sat down to write my first novel that I had no clue how to begin the story, write dialogue, plot the story, or create characters. But I did it anyway.

While I wrote, I read books aimed at the same age group, listened to books on my way to work, and read books on the craft of writing. Then, about a hundred pages in, I realized something. The beginning was horrible (I rewrote it completely), my grammar was horrible (still learning), and my characters were finally speaking to me. I was learning to a degree that Amanda couldn’t believe. She had read my first college papers and they weren’t pretty.

The more I write, the more I learn about writing. Practice can get you to the level of the naturals, and in the end you will feel greater accomplishment. Don’t waste years of your life thinking that you aren’t good enough. Just dive in and learn from your mistakes.

Hoorah! We can use the word “picnic” afterall.

You might have read my rant on the origins of the word “picnic,” and you might not have. Either way we can learn a great lesson from this factual error on my part. I wrongly stated that the word had origins in picking a n*&%#* at lynchings. The interesting part is that I never heard about this until I was in a college class with a professor I considered trustworthy, and he explained to us how it was the truth…That was in 2006.

Now in 2009, having never heard about this word origin since I smartly share it with the world only to realize that my professor must have recieved the brilliantly contrived  e-mail hoax (and believed it).  I was rightly corrected by an anstute reader (See Patti’s Blog) and am happy to share that my information was bad and that we can thank the French for the word picnic as well as fries (this one is legitimate…trust me).

Continue with your picnics but never trust an e-mail. See snopes.com if you want those e-mails broken down to fact and fiction.

Write brain down for maintenance

I had hoped for another 4,000 word night, but I fell short with 1,200. I am going crazy as I have entered into the books final conflict and only have about 10,000 words to go. Ahhhh!  The intense instrumental was at work, but not inspiring enough.

Have I been tricked? Were the two cups of coffee decaf? Time to let my brain continue the story while I sleep. Write brain is being ghosted.

If the muses are speaking then write!

My house was invaded by women and suitcases of jewelry last night, so I took the opportunity to write (despite how much I love hanging with a room full of ladies). With a little help from my Lord of the Rings soundtracks to cover the racous laughter, I produced over 4,000 words (about 15 pages).

A few more nights like this and I will have a first draft of my second novel complete. I wonder what I could do with a tastefully simple party going on in the background?

Sometimes I have to force myself to write to avoid the terrible state of mind known as “writers block.” That is why when the godesses of creativity are smiling upon you, you have to write! write! write!

So you want to write a book?

Have you ever read  a book and said, I could’ve written that. We all have. But writing a book is a complex and long process. In a perfect world experienced by someone with a job and maybe kids: If it takes a year to write, another year to edit and find an agent, another six months for that agent to get a publishing contract, and another eighteen months to get the book on the shelf, you are looking at a four year process. And that is being super optimistic. Most people write for more than ten years and get their fifth or sixth novel published. Writing is not for the faint of heart. Here are ten things to keep in mind if you’ve ever considered writing a book and want to have it published (if you just want to write for yourself and your family, some of this isn’t applicable):

  1. If anyone or anything can convince you not to do it, then don’t waste your time.
  2. Write about what you are passionate about. Your readers will see your passion on the page. No passion equals boring.
  3. Plot is important (I hate getting to the end of a book and saying WHAT!), but a strong protagonist is what will keep people reading.
  4. The muses come and go, so set a schedule and goals to keep yourself motivated. One hour a night, or one page a night, or 500 words a night, whatever! Think this way, one page a night means a first draft in a year. Whatever you prefer set a schedule and stick to it. Otherwise it will probably never get finished, and that is a sad thought.
  5. Know your characters inside and out. Know who they are and you will know how they react when so-and-so dies… Realistic characters with unique voices are the key to good stories that keep people reading.
  6. Your book is not done until it is published! It is difficult to rework the baby that you just spent a year writing, but necessary if you want to see it in print. By your fifth draft you might be ready to send it to publishers or agents.
  7. See where it will fit on the bookshelf at (insert bookstore). If it would be considered its own category, rethink it to make it fit somewhere. Publishers want sales and they can only sell what fits on the shelf at the big stores.
  8. Be prepared to do 90-95 percent of your own marketing. When you are a bestseller, you might get some help from the publisher…maybe.
  9. Be ready for more rejection than you have ever experienced. The big publishers only accept work that is represented by an agent. Agents all have their own preferences and most represent 10-50 authors. Getting their ear is difficult, but the first step in the process. You need thick skin, a good sales pitch, and a solid support group.
  10. Find or start a writers group. Writers are everywhere and the serious ones know that they need constructive feedback to improve their work. These groups not only help with improving your writing, they also provide needed support and networking.

What was that? You still want to write? Then start with your characters and structure a story. Or just start writing (some people can do it this way, I need an outline). Good luck and let your passion fill the blank pages.

She saved my manhood

So I didn’t jump out of a plane at 11,000 feet. In fact, no one did because of the weather. But I wasn’t going to anyway, and the best part—I didn’t have to look my cowardice in the eye and tell anyone. Why? Because my wife did it for me. She is a woman with courage.

 She had the courage to cancel my slot without even getting final consent from me. She knows me well enough to know when I am genuinely worried and cared about me enough to save my manhood and tell everyone for me. And, she is still going to jump out of the airplane when it is rescheduled. What a woman.

Help! I might jump out of a plane at 11,000 feet!

So my chances of dying during a tandem skydive are at worst 1 in 250,000. So what! If I don’t do it I will avoid the opportunity to be  that lucky one, the remembered statistic. I am fully aware that driving in a car is dangerous and that more people die from snake bites than skydiving every year, but I’m still not convinced that I need to do it.

I love rollercoasters and I have experienced a ripcord fall of about 150 feet, but that is more than 10,850 less feet than if I skydive. My wife is doing it, but I’m already fully aware that she is tougher than I am. So why even consider it, you ask? Why jump out of a well functioning plane? I’m still not sure. Will I accept my cowardice or will I pull untapped courage out of some hidden recess in the corner of my mind? I only have about 30 hours to decide.